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07-22-2005, 08:12 AM | #16 |
Got Yorkie? Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Virginia
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| Not at all. Post as many as you like. Only requirment is that you submit onyl poems that you wrote yourself.
__________________ R.I.P sweet Prince.. You are dearly missed. My heart breaks thinking of you, but i know you're in a peaceful place. We love you sooooo much sweet boy |
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07-22-2005, 08:13 AM | #17 |
Mommy To 3 Poochies Donating Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: New York
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| I think the Mill Busters website is just awesome and I feel honored to have my poem posted there. I hope we can all shut these creeps down one day!
__________________ Mommy Loves Codie, Tia & Baby Cali RIP My Precious Katie - I Love You |
07-22-2005, 08:15 AM | #18 |
Owned by Fred Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Dallas, TX
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| Yay! I think I started a personal poem train. All of these poems are awesome. Let's keep them coming, guys!! And I would be honored to have my poem on the site. Here it is: I know that God is watching me, I know He hears my plea, I know He has something planned for me, besides this wire beneath my feet. I am feeling very exhausted, But I don't know what to do. My body is aching, my legs are numb and I do not have any food. This cage is kind of crowded, But I still feel so alone, I hope that He will guide me, And find me a loving home. I miss my children dearly, Their warmth is all I need. But they were stripped away at birth. Because of selfishness and greed. The wind is blowing harder, And the cage is getting cold. I can feel the winter coming again, I wish I had a cozy home. I am beginning to feel weaker, With every passing day. I hope He finds me someone to love Before I pass away. I'll probably end up writihg another one! All of your poems are so deep and influential. |
07-22-2005, 08:20 AM | #19 |
Mommy To 3 Poochies Donating Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: New York
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| Wow Natalie. That is really awesome.
__________________ Mommy Loves Codie, Tia & Baby Cali RIP My Precious Katie - I Love You |
07-22-2005, 08:20 AM | #20 |
BANNED! Join Date: May 2005
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| u can post my poem anywhere u need/want to. DAY 1 i open my eyes for the first time my mother licks me tenderly, like i am worth a million bucks, but i feel like a dime. i am hungry, trying to take some milk from mommy, to no avail, she is to weak to feed me, to sickly and pale. DAY 2 everything is becoming clear, all my siblings hve opened their eyes, we huddle close for wamth from the blistering cold. our mother surrouds us with love and protecton she is the best mother in the world. the cold freezes us like water in a freezer our naturally warm bodies are already sick, at a few weeks of age, we want to die we feel a hundred years old. DAY 3 a creaking noise, a howling wind, dogs barking at us in warning we open our frigid eyes and peer at a human that is unlocking the cage, this is the first human we have ever seen. he has a sack with him, we pant and whine, thinking he has food. instead he shoves his hands greedily into the cage and grabs my brother. my mother growls with all her might but this human strikes her and she falls down, unconcious. one by one he shoves us in the sack. we are silent, with fear, with dread, of what might come next. suddenly we stop swaying in the sack we hear a creaking door open and we are thrown in a worse cage than before. smells are putrid, like manure and urine. this cage is crowded with other scared and sickly puppies whining for their mother. DAY 4 we get moved to a petstore. some of the pups are the lucky ones. they came from a good place that we only see in dreams. a little human girl comes to our cage and stares at me with apprehension as i lay there and watch her with only my eyes. she wants me, she asks her human mother is she can keep me. i pray that she will turn away, for all she sees in me is a cute little puppy, but beneath my big brown eyes lies torture and the great fear of leaving my brothers to go to a human home, worrying they will abuse me like the home that i once had known. DAY 5 i wake up, still in the store with fright i notice that the little girl is once again standing there her eyes wide with delight she says to me "i am taking you home puppy" i whimper as a hand of a human reaches down and picks me up he puts me in a box and shuts it. i bark but no one answers i whine and cry but my mother is no longer here for me i worry if i will ever eat i suffer the torture of a puppy who is only a few weeks old the box stops moving as i worry. the hand moves once more, a door banging open the same door creaking shut. the box opens and two hands descend into the box. i am placed onto the cold floor. my tail tucks in as i cower but as i look up i see that these eyes are gentle filled with love. DAY 6 i fell asleep with the little human. i am starting to trust once again but i am weak from having scarce food since birth. the little girl gently carresses me and carries me into a room i cower once more ' will i be put in a cage again' i ponder but no i yelp in appreciation as i see two bowls ahead of me. i gallop with all my stregnth and eat until, for the first time in my life i am content. DAY 50 (skipping) i wake in the morning feeling odd my legs are weak me head, dizzy i cant walk straight i collapse 'will i die' i wonder my humans take me to the doctor and he tells us that i am ill i have a tumor in my brain. each minute passes i feel weaker and weaker my humans cry and tell the doctor the know my time is over my humans kiss me and i weakly thump my tail a poke, a cold liquid soars through me i lick the little girl's palm gently my big brown eyes shut this is it, i knew it would come, my time is done. think twice before adopting a puppymill pup |
07-22-2005, 08:31 AM | #21 |
Got Yorkie? Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Virginia
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| Rex'z momma. That was so touching. I have tears pouring down my face as I write back to you. It really hurts me...SO BAD, that these dogs are living a life of pain and torture. They're born, only to die. How can people do this???!!?!?! How can they be so cruel!!!!!!
__________________ R.I.P sweet Prince.. You are dearly missed. My heart breaks thinking of you, but i know you're in a peaceful place. We love you sooooo much sweet boy |
07-22-2005, 08:33 AM | #22 |
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| Everyone who wants to have their poems available for the public to read...please go here www.millbusters.com/forums and post your poem. You all did an amazing job!
__________________ R.I.P sweet Prince.. You are dearly missed. My heart breaks thinking of you, but i know you're in a peaceful place. We love you sooooo much sweet boy |
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