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Poem about puppymills by me I was reading about puppymills and that inspired me to write a little poem about it. I find it so sad and heartbreaking. I hope you guys like it! Let me know what you think. I know that God is watching me, I know He hears my plea, I know He has something planned for me, besides this wire beneath my feet. I am feeling very exhausted, But I don't know what to do. My body is aching, my legs are numb and I do not have any food. This cage is kind of crowded, But I still feel so alone, I hope that He will guide me, And find me a loving home. I miss my children dearly, Their warmth is all I need. But they were stripped away at birth. Because of selfishness and greed. The wind is blowing harder, And the cage is getting cold. I can feel the winter coming again, I wish I had a cozy home. I am beginning to feel weaker, With every passing day. I hope He finds me someone to love Before I pass away. |
Thats such a great poem ...... gotta kleenex ? :cry: |
Ah thats a really sad poem. Its good though! |
Thats a very good poem , So sad and so true. |
What a creative mind you have...that poem is awesome. It's so sad, but sadly the truth and you said it so well. That outta be published! |
natalie you are truly gifted! :thumbup: what a heart touching poem :( i so wish i could save them all. |
Very sad...but good poem! |
Natalie, you captured the desperation of a puppy mill dog perfectly! We've got to get this stopped!! For God's sake aren't there any legislators with a heart?? This should not be happening in our country! I think along with the mill busters shirts we also need bumper stickers. We could use the same design as that decided for the shirt. |
That was very touching. Actually got me crying. Please submit this to a no puppy mill website and make sure you get credit for it. Good job |
Great poem. It gave me the shivers. |
Natalie - that was BEAUTIFUL and made me cry - you can submit that around and it will be seen by people ....made me cry. OR you can put it on those awesome business cards you just made - as a bonus for people to read - you're multi talented girl :) |
wow natlie you are very talented. that made me cry. but it was so true and tahts the art that scares me. right now as i'm typing this there's a dog somewhere going through that! thank you-you are a gifted, caring person! |
A beautiful peom, you have such amazing creativity. Natalie, You're awesome |
Wow, that really touched me. I'm sitting here w/ tears in my eyes. Just beautiful, Natalie. |
Natalie, that was a very touching poem you wrote. I love how you made it from the poor little dog's point of view. You did a great job capturing her feelings. :thumbup: :thumbup: |
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