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					Originally Posted by Yorkie2Love  high school...
 thankss i was hoping someone would be like more critical lol
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  No prob!!  I'm not an English teacher (but a native English speaker)...I'm actually a Spanish teacher!!!  But, I do teach HS, and middle school too.  If you have any other questions, let me know! 
Just make sure that when you are 100% finished, the essay flows from one paragraph to the next.  Keep all your thoughts and topics together.  Children, seniors, adults, etc.  Only give the positives because you are persuading someone.  Stay away from the negatives b/c that defeats the purpose!  

  You don't want to scare anyone away by accident b/c they "hadn't thought about 
that."   
 
  
Now the BIG parent/teacher question.  When is this due...tomorrow!?!  
 
  
 