I did note some missing punctuation and unnecessary commas. Have a person good at this sit down and go through it with you word for word. I noticed the word favorite and neutered spelled incorrectly. I also noticed that on the "prices" you need to move up the small short haired breeds to make it more uniform. I would replace the photoart with an actual picture. All in all I thought it was a good website and everything looked very clean. As a potential customer I would ask why do you make them use the package within 90 days. I personally would want a year, but I have never boarded my dog or had it professionally groomed so who am I to say. |