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Old 07-03-2013, 10:58 AM   #21
auntielaurie
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Location: Onalaska Wa.
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Originally Posted by brezofleur View Post
I just looked on my phone so I don't know if it's any different online, but my observations:

1. I didn't immediately see that you have puppies for sale
2. The info you provide is not organized and is in one paragraph. I would suggest reformatting it with headers. I.e., History, Standards, etc
3. Your photos should be titled with the pup's name and a briefer description. At 13+ weeks you should have an idea of their personality

And then what gemy suggested

Good luck!
Thanks, I know it shows up differently on the phone. I'm not sure what to do about that.
I have headers, photos are titled with the adult dogs names.
I do talk about the different personalities, maybe I need to add more, or less you said briefer description?
Thanks
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