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Old 07-03-2013, 08:00 AM   #9
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Originally Posted by brezofleur View Post
I just looked on my phone so I don't know if it's any different online, but my observations:

1. I didn't immediately see that you have puppies for sale
2. The info you provide is not organized and is in one paragraph. I would suggest reformatting it with headers. I.e., History, Standards, etc
3. Your photos should be titled with the pup's name and a briefer description. At 13+ weeks you should have an idea of their personality

And then what gemy suggested

Good luck!
More fantastic suggestions. To reach your market you have to provide your potential customers with relevant content and present the material in an easy to read, logical format. Good luck with your endeavor and wishing the best for your pups.
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