The visor makes Jackson look too serious and does hide his beautiful eyes. In the last set of pics, the one in the middle where his hair is right, is it maybe cut a little shorter farther up between his eyes?
This dilemma is partly how Max ended up with long hair, lol. I could never cut his bangs right when he was a pup.
(P.S. I think you need to start a thread in the General section about your great victory today
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