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Originally Posted by StewiesMom I am almost done with the rest. You all have to read teh second part, too. Thanks for the feedback. Anyone else who wants to contribute is welcome  thanks again. |
If this is about your life, honey, I am sad for all that has happened to your mom and her little family. However, it seems that there is very little sadness in your story, only wonderment for the strong woman who is your mother. Incredible. I love the story, and am sure that your professor will love it as well.
One correction: a path is "forged", not "foraged". To forage is to look for food or supplies. Of course, I guess you can do that on a path!
Nicely done! I am looking forward to part 2!