Thread
:
Anyone Want to Help Me? :D
View Single Post
02-06-2006, 09:50 AM
#
16
BabyFidgette
Learn Yorkie CPR!
Donating Member
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: New Jersey
Posts: 6,855
Sounds good so far. Maybe work on paragraph transitions and/or breaking up some of the paragraphs to segment your thoughts. I was also wondering if this is an autobiography?
__________________
Nicole & Baby
"The more men I meet, the more I love my Yorkie!"
BabyFidgette
View Public Profile
Find More Posts by BabyFidgette
Welcome Guest!
Not Registered?
Join today
and remove this ad!