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xmasbaby75 · 10-20-2008, 12:05 PM

Not sure if I'm right, but I seee a couple things wrong with it ...

1. It's Too long (most paragraphs consist of 3-5 sentences)
2. You can't start a sentence with "But" or "And"

10-20-2008, 12:05 PM	#18
xmasbaby75 YT Graphic Artist Donating Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: RI Posts: 9,607 Blog Entries: 2	Not sure if I'm right, but I seee a couple things wrong with it ... 1. It's Too long (most paragraphs consist of 3-5 sentences) 2. You can't start a sentence with "But" or "And" __________________ Shadow Dancer (RIP) , Gellica, Li'l Sapphire, Phantom, & Brandi Blu (RIP)