 constructive criticism
Hi Yorkie mama. I came across your post, and decided to check out your site. Before I say anything, I want to say good job. I don't know if I would be comfortable doing this myself. I know that you're just starting out, and I just wanted to point out some of the problems that I saw. Now, mind you, I'm not a professional copy editor, but do have to proof scripts in my job, and some of this may just be the look you're going for.
On your Yorkie page, I did notice you had a few mispelled words. One that I remember was carrer. I think you meant career. Untill should be until. There were several words that should be capitalized. i, piglett. (some were, and some weren't. I was trying to figure out what the word unsur was. And some of the sentences didn't seem complete or the grammar was incorrect. There didn't seem to be punctuation in some of the sentences.
On the mini-Aussie page -- again, some mispelled words and punctuation missing. Some of the sentences didn't seem to be complete, or didn't make sense to me. And, some things needed to be capitalized. It just seemed like the format for the page wasn't quite right. (the centered lines seemed to be a bit distracting)
Again, I definitely don't want to insult you in any way... but I know that when I look at websites, alot of times when I see blatant mistakes, I'm more distracted by that then by what is on the site.
I loved your pictures, by the way.
I think you're on the right track -- and again, I realize this is a "work in progress" and am sure when you're finished, you'll have a wonderful site! |