Ok.... first of all I LOVE the logo! Very classy! I like the overall look and feel but hey you asked for it so I'm gonna sock it to you! I do mean to help you and not bash you. You and hubby are definitely on the right track!
Ready????
I don't care for the font used in "Welcome to TheLook.com!" - Maybe change the font in "Welcome" Times Roman is just too common.
Each time you mention the store name "The Look" within any paragraph, it should be set apart from the rest of the text to emphasize it is the store name and not just part of the sentence - As I'm reading it, I forgot that it's the name of the store. Maybe in bold, italic, different font or color.
Also I noticed in the welcome page it reads "The Look" with a space and in the legacy page it reads "TheLook" with out a space.
Your signature is all bitmapped and looks like a typeset font. Can you scan in a true signature at a higher resolution to make it look cleaner?
The Sale Items could be more subtle in my opinion - Maybe move it up to the end of the menu options in the same size, but do keep it red.
Finally, I'm using Explorer and I can't see the scrolling images unless I scroll down the web page. It would be nice if it was under the Logo Banner to add a splash of color and interest when the window first opens.
Hope this helps and I didn't hurt your feeling too much!
Seriously - You are both doing great! |